Me n myself
Sunday, June 08, 2008 Edit This 19 Comments »
People say I am mad,
But I say I am not that bad.
Some says I am Jhansi ki Rani,
But I say I am a simple prani :)
Some say I am a chatterbox,
But without it I am a dumb fox.
Some says I am naughty,
But are these meant for the age of forty.
Some says that my mind has defect,
But I say that no one is perfect.
Some says that I muck about,
But I say that my mind is full of any doubt.
Some says I am affable,
But I say I am not that capable.
Some says my future is bright,
But till now there is no light.
Some will say that this composition is dry,
But I will say that it is my first try.
But I say I am not that bad.
Some says I am Jhansi ki Rani,
But I say I am a simple prani :)
Some say I am a chatterbox,
But without it I am a dumb fox.
Some says I am naughty,
But are these meant for the age of forty.
Some says that my mind has defect,
But I say that no one is perfect.
Some says that I muck about,
But I say that my mind is full of any doubt.
Some says I am affable,
But I say I am not that capable.
Some says my future is bright,
But till now there is no light.
Some will say that this composition is dry,
But I will say that it is my first try.
19 comments:
hey... im really impressed with your blog... great job keep it up...
Welcome to blogosphere!!!
It's a nice beginning.... really a very nice first attempt.
@ chiran : thanx dear..hope i wil keep doing dis work..n hope i wil b able to contribute somethng diff in dis one,..
Welcome to blogging!
(Beware : Its Addictive!)
and mast poem gal...
My fav lines :
Some says I am naughty,
But are these meant for the age of forty.
(Another fellow bitten by the blogger bug..huhaha)
welcum to blogging
thanx 4 welcoming me 2 blogging..dekhna ye h ki kab tak isse nibhati hun..
hey!...welcome to the blog world!!!....nice poem...describes u like anything..:)
keep it up
n keep posting
hey now dis 1 was really cute!!!
@ keshu : thanx dear n thanx 4 ur appreciation..
@ priyanka : i just tried to express myself through this poem
hey dear.... its very nice effort made by u...!! :) its simply awesome..!
By the way can u tell me itni inspiration mili kaha se..? huh...?
@ surinder : thanx dear..well ye inspiration mujhe mere unp xams se mili thi..actually i was so frustrated wd tht xam tht i dnt knw hw i composd a poem while studyin tht sub
bhagwaan kare, aap exaams se aise hi pareshaan reh kar, itni achi achi poetry karti rahe ..... ha ha ha ha
he he he he .. :) :)
take care dear and keep writing.... my best wishes r with u tu ek din jaroor mera naam roshan karegi.... he he he :)
@ surinder : yaar plz itni taarif na kar..bahot hi bakwaas poetry h meri..mere frnds jo likhte h uske samne kuch nahi h
nicely written!
katal likha h..ab tujhe aage se kuch bolne se pehle mujhe sochna padega kyunki tune mast jawab pehle hi iss post k thru de diye h..aage se jhansi ki rani bolu tujhe ya prani..lol
Its very nice, naughty one ia just awesome :)
Cute and funny poem, nice introduction
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