True Friends...
Wednesday, June 18, 2008 Edit This 19 Comments »
Friends are like Heaven, may be six or seven.
They will never let u in grief, but just have a belief.
They will listen to your crap, but still will clap.
Whenever u r manky, they will give u their hanky.
Whenever u has fear, u will found them near.
When u feels like a nap, they will bring their lap.
They will sharp your brain, even in bus or train.
They care like a mother n scold like a father.
You can talk to them, u can dance with them.
You can share your secrets w/o any regrets.
May be my thoughts r not good but I wrote them in full mood.
With this, I m ending but its just another beginning…
They will never let u in grief, but just have a belief.
They will listen to your crap, but still will clap.
Whenever u r manky, they will give u their hanky.
Whenever u has fear, u will found them near.
When u feels like a nap, they will bring their lap.
They will sharp your brain, even in bus or train.
They care like a mother n scold like a father.
You can talk to them, u can dance with them.
You can share your secrets w/o any regrets.
May be my thoughts r not good but I wrote them in full mood.
With this, I m ending but its just another beginning…
19 comments:
Good work again...
although the way of writing is remarkably similar....
it demonstrates the place of friends in your life...
really u r a friend of friends...
chiran : thanx agn dear
swati mata ki jai ho!.. mast likha hai girl!
so finally ur this poem also got completed.....
congrats....
keep blogging
thanx dear..lets c whn i wl post d next 1
As i hvnt tried it ever,
may b due 2 sm fear..
U also hv smthn to boast,
aftr writing sch a post..
Your efforts wont go in vain,
i hope u write smthn more again..
Oh, aftr writing dese 3-4 lines,
i think its nt crime,
writing anything n make it rhyme..
wah, maine baithe-2 hi sorta poem likh di.. :)
@ Ankit : sabhi kavi ho gaye hai.. kya baat hai??.. wah wah! tu bhi ek blog start kar le...
@ ankit : waw waw ankit..chal tu bhi meri hi category ka h..tuta futta kavi :)..keep it up bro..
@ nishi: sab apse hi prerit h madam ji
hey swati dese words brought me a smile n a lil laugh : "chal tu bhi meri hi category ka h..tuta futta kavi :).."
@ ankit : well dost hote hi hasane ke liye hai :)
hey swati ur poem is really nice dear!!!
i mean tune ye sab kab se shuru kar dia...itna deep thinkin gud yaar u r changin...anyways god bless u ..n keep writtin such stuff..bye n tc
@ priyanka : yaar mujhe bhi nahi pata ki ye mene kaise likh di..bas ye pata ki ye xam tym mei half compose ki thi n half abhi vella panti mei..thnx 4 appreciating..waise mene kuch jhuth nahi likha..mene sirf wo likha h jaise mere dost h..tum sab ho ho aise..thanx 4 ur frndshp
i can understand ki tu kitni waili hai. baitha baitha itni achi poetry likh rahi hai
@ ankit: ek ubbharta hua kavi
oh great description of a friend...!
i don't think u need to say more.!
well i wish if i am in ur friend list or not... he he he :) thoda gussa hai na aajkal..?
@ arush : well i dnt knw whthr its gud or nt bt i wrote wt i feel abt my frnds..
@ surinder: thnx 4 appreciating..n ofcourse u r in my frnd list ..n y u thnk tht i m upset wd u ..no i m nt at all upset wd u
are waaah ...!!!!
un 6-7 me mai bhi aa gaya...?? :)
kamaal hai ladki teri to..!! :)
well thank god u r not upset..! :)
tere se mile itna time ho gaya na that's y mujhe laga... !!
@ surinder : idiot i said MAy b 6 or 7 nt xactly 6 or 7..n ye jaruri to nahi ki mei tujhse mili nahi iska matlab ye ki mei upset hun idiot.
You are good seriously at writing couplets.
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